I just read it.

It was pretty good. I'm not sure what I think of it completely yet.

But I read the whole thing, so that definitely must mean something.

narky | November 01, 08:02 CET

this fan fic is incredibly odd, not sure if I dislike it, but definately odd

rabid | November 01, 08:28 CET

Someone should one day write a fanfic where Angel or Buffy, have to fight the Killer Klowns From Outer Space. They turn people into cotton candy and suck out their blood. Damn thing writes its self.

misbegotten3 | November 01, 08:30 CET

Easily the best fanfic idea I've heard in a long while. Who doesn't love those Killer Klowns.

rabid | November 01, 09:06 CET

lol. My close friend online wrote a fan fic where Buffy and the Scoobs battled Michael Myers from Halloween. He did a very good job of bringing two different worlds together. He even wrote a sequel and is writing a third. I've also started a fan fiction season six with a friend. The first episode is online. If anyone is interested, I can paste a link later in this thread...or another.

BurkleFreak | November 01, 09:24 CET

Could someone tell me how to read "First Law" if I missed it at 9pm? Thank you.

WheelsOfJoy | November 01, 10:17 CET

It's a script. Click on the link and read it. You can't really "miss" it.

KernelM | November 01, 10:50 CET

OK- I'm with WheelsOfJoy! There's no link on the page! All I'm getting it the page that says, "premiering here", etc. Tried reloading the page & "NADA" - Help!

AncientMagicks | November 01, 16:36 CET

That's rather odd WheelsOfJoy and AncientMagicks. I click on the above link and it takes me straight to the story. I'm using IE at the moment, had some software issues with firefox. Not sure what to tell you two to do next. Sorry.

Madhatter | November 01, 16:58 CET

Try clearing your browser cache - there doesn't seem to be a problem accessing it from Netscape either

Ruadh | November 01, 21:19 CET

Eureka! Clearing the Browser cache seemingly fixed the problem! Thanks Ruadh - Got to go & read a bit.

AncientMagicks | November 01, 21:43 CET

At least this one has some kind of imagination to it. I can almost visualise this one happening - some of the other AtS Season 6 just lack any drive or vision to them.

I am hopeless though at seeing symbolism in anything so I didn't really get the tea party thing. I usually have to have these things explained to me. Witness Buffy's 'Is this a penis metaphor?' remark in 'The Zeppo'. I didn't get the car thing until someone drew my attention to that. The episode makes a lot more sense after that!

I usually have to be hit over the head with it (the metaphor that is, not the penis - any way, that's not the point). I think the characters sounded OK and, although a little deus ex machina (or is that deus ex dragonis), the events had *some* drama to them. However, I always reserve judgement until some more episodes 'air'. In the 50-odd series (BtVS, AtS and various spinoffs) that I have read so far, a number start well but fall over fairly quickly after the first few episodes.

catalyst2 | November 02, 16:48 CET