A More Horrible Ending.
Erin Palette offers her suggestion for a stronger Penny, a darker ending, and an even more horrible doctor.
July 23 2008
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mikamom | July 23, 18:41 CET
- "Things happen" (and NOT "for a reason")
- "What a crazy random happenstance!"
In Act II Billy & Penny had this somewhat innocent conversation about how life sometimes throws unexpected consequences at you. So in Act III -- in its original form -- we see how deadly these consequences can be.
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SteveP | July 23, 18:45 CET
Dr. Horrible would not have had what it takes to kill Penny on his own. Even his turning evil is debatable, because in the end we see him in his apartment, looking like a loser. Maybe he is not happy in the Evil League of Evil.
Valentyn | July 23, 18:53 CET
knitterwatcher | July 23, 18:54 CET
Err, that's surely a joke because him "accidentally" buying two frozen yoghurts is emphatically NOT "a crazy random happenstance" ?
Events carrying him somewhere he doesn't really want to go is what defines the character (and makes him a tragic hero) IMO. Dr H isn't "all set to kill his nemesis", he very clearly hesitates beforehand, part of the tragedy is that he loses everything because he still had the capacity for self-doubt and mercy (he even tries to warn Hammer about his malfunctioning death ray).
To me this isn't him contemplating a course of action, it's him basically wondering if anyone would even notice the difference i.e. if a mass poisoning actually is part of the status quo, if the world is a place where that sort of thing happens, maybe not without comment, but as a matter of course, as part of the normal run of events, tragic but "one of those things".
I very much don't believe Billy shooting Penny, it just isn't consistent with what we've seen before. She is one of his objectives, one of the reasons why he wants to disturb the universe, he isn't gonna kill her to do it (even if the "cutting off his nose to spite his face" aspect is true to the character).
Saje | July 23, 18:54 CET
zeitgeist | July 23, 18:59 CET
;-)
Saje | July 23, 19:01 CET
But that's just my take on it.
phred | July 23, 19:02 CET
newcj | July 23, 19:07 CET
Valentyn is correct. He didn't have it in him.
To me a major theme in Horrible is that there aren't bad people as much as there are normal people who have had horrible things happen to them. I'm not defending Horrible or the actions he will choose to take in the future, heinous as they may be. I'm saying that in order for him to be believable, we have to identify with what has turned him bad.
At the end of Horrible as it is, we identify with the villain by saying "Okay, I can see how that would ruin your life." At the end of Horrible as suggested by the article, we would simply say "What an awful person."
sleeper | July 23, 19:07 CET
Ilana | July 23, 19:11 CET
Separately... The unexpected "wake" of Penny dying is what truly took Billy's life in a different direction. Had he killed Captain Hammer as planned, he would have gotten into the ELE but I don't think he would have fundamentally changed. Billy felt that CH deserved to die, so killing him would be justified (in Billy's eyes). But... with his actions inadvertently leading to Penny's death I believe he somewhat "lost his soul" -- as seen in his vacant stare and lack of costume in the final shot of Act III. That is the tragedy -- "well intended" actions can lead to horrible and unintended consequences. And when this happens the protagonist is left with a guilt that can never be appeased.
SteveP | July 23, 19:11 CET
But that's just my take on it.
Because even though he's achieved "what he wanted" he is sort of hollowed out. Notice also the costume choices, both colors and coverage for him in the "...a thing." moment. Its suggestive of mourning and feeling small or needing to hide a bit. Billy looks ashen, the room is dark, he is wearing only black and grey. He is still not the supervillian he always thought he wanted to be. He's the same scared, insecure Billy that made all of those blog entries, but now he doesn't even have the hope that Penny brought him. A completely pyrrhic victory. Seems like his victory has made him feel nothing aside from (you'll pardon) horrible. He is still Billy, swept up in a tide of events that are side effects or consequences rather than true choices.
Trademark pie is very fibrous ;)
zeitgeist | July 23, 19:12 CET
That's close to my take on the "turn" song. I saw it as partly him working himself up to killing Hammer but also partly about roles. Billy is so close to accepting the super-villain role that he's committing one of the biggest mistakes any super-villain makes and at the same time partaking in one of the role's biggest clichés - he's wasting time gloating and explaining his plan when he should just be killing Hammer.
It's about his inability to create his own role and his need to fall back on the old lies.
(and this is precisely why the tragic ending is a work of genius and a happy one would just be brilliant entertainment - a happy Horrible and Penny walking into the sunset to make little begoggled babies would be great but it'd have a slightness to it. Now it's an epic for the ages)
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Saje | July 23, 19:21 CET
ETA: How many evil/semi-evil characters...
ETAA: Make that potentially evil characters...
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newcj | July 23, 19:28 CET
Sue me.
jcs | July 23, 19:32 CET
zeitgeist | July 23, 19:35 CET
Sly | July 23, 19:47 CET
(and this is precisely why the tragic ending is a work of genius and a happy one would just be brilliant entertainment - a happy Horrible and Penny walking into the sunset to make little begoggled babies would be great but it'd have a slightness to it. Now it's an epic for the ages)
This is exactly how I feel about it despite my initial dismay at the turn of events.
Syren | July 23, 19:57 CET
And on top of that, she wanted the characters to be inconsistent, and the story to make less sense?
Hmm...
jfhlbuffy | July 23, 20:06 CET
And yet suddenly, out of nowhere, out of all this ineptitude and squeamishness, he could suddenly find the force of will, the intestinal fortitude, to coldly murder the girl of his dreams. In what way does this make it a better or stronger ending? Blacch! It's the worst ending possible.
The whole point is having an inept Dr. Horrible get into the ELE because of a "crazy random happenstance," not as an act of his own volition. He's inept, he's a nerd, he's a poseur. What he is not is a character with the "will to power" that creates his own destiny.
Enough with the idiot "better" endings. If you don't like it, fine, feel free to say so. But I, for one, think it was about as perfect an ending as you could get.
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bjarmson | July 23, 20:10 CET
ETA: How many evil/semi-evil characters...
ETAA: Make that potentially evil characters...
Hmm ...
William the Bloody (possibly nee Pratt)
Liam (variant of William)
Billy Fordham
Billy (from the Ats episode 'Billy')
Who else ?
Saje | July 23, 20:17 CET
But I just woke up, so I don't know if any of that makes sense. :P
LiLi | July 23, 20:20 CET
C. A. Bridges | July 23, 20:20 CET
No. Making him make the choice isn't as powerful as having the choice made for him and affecting him.
Regardless, she proved to be weak in the end by allowing herself to settle for "okay" despite her obvious feelings growing for someone else.
No. I see no other logical outcome if Billy is to become Dr. H. Otherwise, it would never happen. If Capt. H had deliberately killed Penny, Dr. H. would become a hero instead of a villain. Instead since it ended the way it did, society provides no comfort for his loss. Society has no place in Dr. H's world. They're all useless and pointless.
By killing Penny himself as suggested at that blog, it would prove that nothing would have any purpose to him... not even the ELE.
No. He had to join the ELE, and Act III as it is was the only way it could happen.
TheGamut | July 23, 20:29 CET
Turbofist911 | July 23, 20:38 CET
Simon | July 23, 20:46 CET
But that's just my take on it.
phred | July 23, 19:02 CET
That was my thought too after watching it the first time, distracted by all the "OMG!" and "WTF?"s.
After watching it again, immediately, I had a new thought.
Billy = broken.
deadbessie | July 23, 21:32 CET
Dr Horrible is classic tragedy. Tragedies are defined by death - usually deaths that are pointless or absurd and certainly avoidable (thus the tragedy). That the death is predictable is as irrelevant as the predictability of the marriage (actual or implied) at the end of a classic comedy.
Clearly, there aren't a lot of marriages in Joss's work. His work leans more to the tragic side of things. To wish he would to write a happy ending with a happy couple riding off into wedded bliss (at least until the sequel) is probably to wish he were a different writer.
I for one hope he never begins to feel the need to write in order to satisfy an audience.
bigsofty | July 23, 21:35 CET
zeitgeist | July 23, 18:59 CET
Hey! I understood this! And I'm a firm believer in it. So much for Act 3 discussion coming to an end... *cackles*
Valentyn | July 23, 18:53 CET
I agree with your statement, Valetyn, but I emphasize the "accident" part when applying it to Dr. Horrible. It was an accident that Penny died. That's why Billy is not really evil. He's still Billy, desolate, but the view of him as changed to "evil".
I really don't disagree with anyone on this thread. Except for those who disagree with Saje. To them, I say, "How dare you!" ;)
If anyone wants to dissect this some more, lighting, clothing, phrases have been posted on Act 3's thread. I'm working on figuring out rhythm patterns right now. (Well, not right now, but I will.)
korkster | July 23, 21:36 CET
;-)
Saje | July 23, 21:51 CET
NYPinTA | July 23, 21:52 CET
http://andrewleesotherworlds.blogspot.com/2008/07/dr-horribles-singalong-blog-preparing.html
Radaar | July 23, 22:06 CET
And how exactly are you loving the puppies??
Within the bounds of trademark law, of course. Or its spirit anyway. I like to think.
Saje | July 23, 22:11 CET
Sunfire | July 23, 22:21 CET
NYPinTA | July 23, 22:23 CET
Simon | July 23, 22:28 CET
Sunfire | July 23, 22:29 CET
NYPinTA | July 23, 22:36 CET
Simon | July 23, 22:39 CET
(And this commentary on the commentary makes me think that Mr. Whedon did a better job of tragic descent with a 40 minute musical comedy than Mr. Lucas did in three high budget prequels.)
OneTeV | July 23, 22:50 CET
SteveP | July 23, 22:51 CET
NYPinTA | July 23, 22:52 CET
Then again, perhaps the fact that the "good guy" killed her is what pushed Dr. Horrible over the edge into true evil.
RaisedByMongrels | July 23, 22:53 CET
Sunfire | July 23, 23:00 CET
I'm glad you clarified, because my presence around these parts during this past whirlwind-of-a-week has been spotty, and I thought I remembered your take on Act 3 differently.
m'cookies actual | July 23, 23:03 CET
Having said that, at the end of the day, this was Joss' project and I'll respect anything he does, it was his choice on which way to end it, and that makes it the right choice.
Apocalypse | July 23, 23:13 CET
Grey's far more interesting onscreen to me. And far more real. Glory was intriguing and somewhat unpredictable when she had no remorse whatsoever, but even more so when human emotions and reservations started to creep up on her.
Sunfire | July 23, 23:18 CET
It's interesting to think of what might have been, but I think that Joss made the right choice. The poignancy for me is that he didn't want her dead -- if he did want her dead, even if only for a moment, then the ending would be ruined for me. I wouldn't be able to buy that look on his face in the end.
MattK | July 23, 23:35 CET
MattK | July 23, 23:40 CET
Got to disagree with Apolcalypse. Billy turning evil does not make him tragic. If he turned fully evil, then there would be no suffering or downfall of the central character. Billy having a blind spot, a weakness of character, that leads to a soul-crushing outcome to his actions, is tragedy.
OneTeV | July 23, 23:50 CET
If so, then Billy showed his evil when Penny interrupted his heist in Act 1. Maybe we all hurt the ones we love at times by way of inattentiveness. He wasn't pursuing the freeze ray for Penny. Had he not been distracted but hesitant or shy, I could have identified. But he saw the moment and shrugged.
And I also say Captain Hammer chose evil by using lethal, unnecessary force. What's he doing pulling a trigger? That's what he should be discussing with his therapist!
I'd love to hear NF's take on Hammer vis-a-vis Cpt. Reynolds and the Martin Firrell Hero Projects.
napua | July 24, 00:05 CET
Yes, this to me makes it the classical tragedy that Joss defined it as. Billy's strength--the thing that was drawing Penny to him without his even noticing--was that he was ultimately good and compassionate. Thus, the strength that kept him from shooting Hammer ultimately led to his downfall.
It's like Shakespeare.
Jobo | July 24, 00:34 CET
Captain Hammer is just as much a villain, except he gets away with what he does because everyone lets him. He's a self centered bully but has great PR and people swallow the idea of him as the "hero" because he looks the part. He sure doesn't act it, putting people at risk, being unaware of his effect on people around him, not liking ducks...
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NYPinTA | July 24, 01:00 CET
Billy's priority is clearly his own self-interest in his childish Dr. Horrible power games and attaining the ridiculous goal of membership in the ELE, not having a normal relationship with "the girl of his dreams." His fate is sealed. If he abandons the Wonderflonium heist and has coffee with Penny everything unfolds differently. Penny never meets and gets involved with Captain Hammer, and thus can't die in the manner portrayed. Billy is given the chance to step off the path toward evilness, but refuses to take that path. He doesn't want to put in time working on a relationship, he'll just buy Penny off eventually by giving her "the keys to a shiny new Australia." What a creep.
bjarmson | July 24, 02:59 CET
The party gave me instant vertigo - it's a short little scene but it could be a nightmare you had after eating something that disagreed with you; the strange music, the cowboys bobbing weirdly up and down as Billy passes them in the doorway. And I was nauseous because I could feel where things were going ... downhill ... time out of joint. It's a gem of a scene that leads into total darkness.
Tonya J | July 24, 03:25 CET
I wonder how many times Dr. Horrible has pointed a raygun at Captain Hammer and had nothing happen.
The Anti-Muscle raygun only makes a clicking sound. http://www.myspace.com/darkhorsepresents?issuenum=12&storynum=2 Captain Hammer grabs it and says "What does this one not do?"
So how many times has this happened before.
Then the Freeze ray didn't work at the SuperHero Memorial Bridge. Took too long to warm up...that would look like another non-working raygun.
Captain Hammer is singing his song when he is hit by the Freeze Raygun. He unfreezes and notices that Dr. Horrible has snuck up on him.
Notice how Captain Hammer finishes his song "Way". Probably doesn't even know he was frozen, didn't even see the Freeze raygun at all and therefore could not realize that one of Dr. Horrible's rayguns had actually worked.
So why should he think that Dr. Horrible's Death raygun would work. And he certainly couldn't know that it would blow up. I was really surprised that he didn't hold the raygun backwards.
Anonymous1 | July 24, 04:18 CET
I want my... I want my... I want my D V D...
JoAnnP38 | July 24, 04:45 CET
The character building in Act I and II was not forceful enough to allow Horrible to be the type to kill Penny. He couldn't even imagine anyone firing her! How was he supposed to be able to kill her?! He was looking self-conscious when he was preparing to kill Hammer as well. To make the ending of Horrible killing Penny it would have required huge changes to Act I and II
@bjarmson I like the way you put that. Although Horrible may be a creep, he's misguided.
Hee | July 24, 04:49 CET
I think he's an exceptionally sympathetic character, and a creep wouldn't be.
Tonya J | July 24, 05:00 CET
There's been too many nice, quiet guys who gunned down large numbers of people for extremely nebulous reasons, for anyone to be this naive. Ever hear about the banality of evil argument regarding all those people in Nazi Germany who worked in the concentration and death camps.
If you were in a gathering of people and someone started shooting a death ray (or just a gun) would you care if they were sympathetic or misguided, or would you just think they were a homicidal maniac. People seem to want to blame Hammer for killing Penny, but it was a peaceful gathering until the sympathetic, if misguided, Dr. showed up with his lethal weaponry. If you take a bomb into a roomful of people and someone gets killed, it's your fault even if it only accidently explodes. I'll stick with my Billy is a creep judgment.
bjarmson | July 24, 06:16 CET
SoddingNancyTribe | July 24, 06:27 CET
jcs | July 24, 06:48 CET
Being more interested in the heist at one stage in his life proves nothing, as it's just one point in time. People are not static, feelings change.
SmileTime | July 24, 09:10 CET
Saje | July 24, 09:38 CET
Mr. Whedon has indicated a desire to do more with the character and explore Dr. Horrible's world further...which is why Dr. Horrible's Sing Along Blog doesn't make him into a complete monster. The main point of Dr. Horrible as a character is to subvert the "evil scientist" stereotype that pervades comic books(and many hollywood movies), it would be less of a subversion if he actually committed murder.
I also think Dr. Horrible's rise to celebrity like status wouldn't be as bitingly satirical if he had earned his Worst Supervillain Ever headline...it's far funnier and more realistic for him to become cool by accident, not design.
The Londinium Sun | July 24, 12:08 CET
And it must be a special level of hell, when the villians who compliment the Doctor on his actions are making him remember Penny every waking moment.
OneTeV | July 24, 13:39 CET
He follows Penny on her date. He's more than a creep, but that is the definition of creepy.
Billy's strength--the thing that was drawing Penny to him without his even noticing--was that he was ultimately good and compassionate.
Was he really though? He seemed to be, and he certainly reacted badly to Moist's murder suggestions, but he said it wasn't elegant or creative. Not his style. There was nothing compassionate in his objection. He didn't talk to Penny about helping people. Just about wanting to be an achiever and feeling dejected. She seemed drawn to him because he needed encouragement. Toward what, she wasn't really aware.
Sunfire | July 24, 15:29 CET