Joss And Four Acts!
In response to the comments to her spoiler-free review of the "Dollhouse pilot" here on Whedonesque, Jill Golick explains the structure of one-hour-long tv shows and once again praises the pilot of "Dollhouse" as "a terrific story", that "leaves you with lots to think about". No spoilers .
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May 03 2008
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Makes one wonder where the opening credits will go. Maybe just a lead-in (including previouslies, probably) with no real title sequence, the way SCC does?
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alixtii | May 03, 16:59 CET
Most hour-longs have a teaser and four acts, except pilots often don't have a teaser, or air the teaser and first act back-to-back, putting the main titles at the end of the first act (and then inserting the extra commercial break for reruns). In the past few years, FOX and ABC have switched to having shows with a teaser plus five or six acts.
Invisible Green | May 03, 18:56 CET
I'm not. Running the titles over the action means the show has stolen back some story minutes from the ad-obsessed networks. I don't like X seconds of potential story time being wasted by an opening title sequence.
theonetruebix | May 03, 19:31 CET
There's a point to closing tags , but not in every show. Heck, I know some people who don't even like teasers; they think a show should start with the credits.
But how about that shot of ELiza? Aye-yie-yie-yie-yie! (Hey, we Pennsylfawnische Deitschcakes say it too, it's not just Cuban.)
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DaddyCatALSO | May 03, 20:10 CET
I'm a fan too, despite what you say; which is true, except I'd argue it's not time wasted. The title sequence sets the tone, becomes something memorable. Can you imagine Buffy with just a Lost-esque "Buffy" on the screen for a few seconds instead of the brilliant titles we had. Not to mention the music . . . Firefly, too, you could argue the tone of that was set by the opening song, it's the first thing you notice, and it sticks in your mind.
MattK | May 03, 20:19 CET
Invisible Green | May 03, 20:30 CET
I get the tone-setting of opening title sequences. But they aren't why I watch the shows. I watch the shows for the story.
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theonetruebix | May 03, 20:43 CET
mei_mei | May 03, 20:58 CET
floofypooh | May 03, 21:01 CET
zeitgeist | May 03, 23:30 CET
Pretty impressive.
jcs | May 04, 00:57 CET
Pretty impressive.
I was thinking the same thing...but then we have some impressive trouble-makers here. ;-)
newcj | May 04, 01:55 CET
It's a shame that they seem to be becoming almost obsolete, with a lot of shows opting to just show a brief title, probably to make room for more commercial time than increasing the length of the episodes, so I don't entirely buy the idea that they allow episodes to be longer. After all, every episode always varies in length and I'm sure most shows probably vary in at least a few minutes between their longest and shortest ever episodes.
I absolutely love the opening titles of HBO shows, and I think they really appreciate that they can be almost like art- Six Feet Under and The Sopranos both spring to mind, although of course they probably had more freedom with producing intricate, unusual and slightly longer opening titles. I hope that Dollhouse continues in a similar tradition.
Razor | May 04, 02:10 CET
Pretty impressive.
Pfft, you should see what I can do when I forget commas (for instance it turns out there're a couple of ways to interpret "No surrender" ;-).
I do like a good credits sequence though I can also see the point about "stealing" story time, some US "hour" shows are about 42 minutes after adverts are removed (and "half-hour" comedies come in at about 21 minutes) so there's hellish little time to waste (it's different on cable though - the 'Dexter' and 'Carnivale' credits stand out from recent years as great examples of sequences that totally set the tone for the upcoming show).
Not thought about act structure much (being more a TV user than a pusher ;) but I sometimes think you can tell a BBC show that's been created with the US market in mind because there're places you could have an act out, even if it's not a huge "fade to suede" moment like Buffy, 'Angel' or 'Firefly' had.
... probably to make room for more commercial time than increasing the length of the episodes ...
Yeah but that's a chicken/egg thing surely Razor ? I'd speculate that the networks decide they want to sell more ad space and then figure where it's coming from so "micro" credit sequences do save actual story time.
Be a pity if structure became too dictated by fitting ad breaks into shows but I guess that's the fine line commercial television has to walk (and as costs keep going up it's only gonna get finer).
Saje | May 04, 02:35 CET
Supersymmetrical | May 04, 03:25 CET
So I'm good with either.
BrownCoat_Tabz | May 04, 04:05 CET
Plus, it's another aspect of the show for me to get excited about and fall in love with.
Jobo | May 04, 04:59 CET
Anyway I need a new ringtone, and am holding out for it to be the 'Dollhouse' theme!
missb | May 04, 05:24 CET
UnpluggedCrazy | May 04, 05:46 CET
Clearly the beginning episodes would have few, if any, Echo flashback flashbacks, but I think it would be pretty neat to see the library grow with the show.
Briands84 | May 04, 06:17 CET
As for the music itself, I kind of see it being sort of Radiohead-y. Like a soft, kind of creepy song. It'll probably be an original piece though, going by past Whedonverse opening sequences.
Racoon Boy | May 04, 08:41 CET
Donnie | May 04, 11:41 CET
jpr | May 04, 11:57 CET
Saje | May 04, 12:28 CET
But I also like the stark and simple LOST title. It fits the show.
So I guess I'm good either way, so long as it fits the show.
Dizzy | May 04, 13:01 CET
IIRC, during the first season of Bugs (a fairly dire 1990s hi-tech action series shown on BBC 1) the episodes were 45 minutes long and had fade-to-blacks where the commercial breaks would go. I think the producers were trying to sell the show not to the US itself but to foreign countries where American series were popular - they tried to make the setting non-specific by putting false number plates on the cars, avoiding mentioning real places, etc.
Later on, they dropped the fade-to-blacks and each episode was 50 minutes, from what I remember.
Gag Halfrunt | May 04, 14:18 CET
This really bugs me along with the coming next weeks at the end of so many programmes. For a long time I had no idea how many humans were left thanks to the usefulness of DVD chapter skipping.
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moley75 | May 04, 14:37 CET
Excellent move, z! I take it there been no replies as of yet?
I never watch the BSG flash-forward sequence, just too spoilery.
Amen to that, always cover my eyes. Must be a SicFi ideal...
Madhatter | May 04, 17:25 CET
Might have been better with some best of BSG Space battles, depending on what type of audience they are trying to stop from changing the channel.
Just watched the movie 'The TV Set', reminded me of that Joss quote of how much developing Tv shows felt like being punched with bricks or something similar, really hope his experiences with Dollhouse is better.
jpr | May 04, 17:43 CET
And the preview segments... With a show like Buffy, I was often hungry enough for more that I was glad to grasp at a few seconds of hints. But, I do think they may have gone a bit too far when they showed the final few frames of the next episode, as "Entropy's" preview of "Seeing Red" did... :(
Big fan of the "previously on"s, though. The one big disappointment I have in the BtVS and Angel DVD sets is that (almost) none of these are included, even as an option, with the episodes. Was quite happy to see them on the Lost season 1 set. (OTOH, the Mutant Enemy DVDs have far, far, FAR superior subtitling to Lost.)
LKW | May 04, 18:33 CET
miri47 | May 04, 19:55 CET
So in the interests of longevity, I'd probably prefer that the Dollhouse has either a stellar opening credits or none at all.
Dym | May 04, 23:19 CET
The music definitely sets the tone: you could have an uninitiated person listen to the opening song for AtS and BtVS and be able to tell which is darker; a person could get a good stab at at least one of the main themes of Firefly just by listening to the song.
I like what Dym mentioned about longevity, as well. A lot of older shows live on in their theme songs, like Beverly Hillbilles, Cheers, Charles in Charge, Green Acres, I Dream of Jeannie, etc. etc.
For example, I've seen only one of those shows--Beverly Hillbillies. But I know all of the theme songs.
As for the "Previously on...", I like them for TV, but find them useless on DVD. I think that anyone who's enough of a fan to buy or rent the DVDs will have some idea of what's going on.
BandofBuggered | May 05, 01:28 CET
Raggedy Edge | May 05, 02:43 CET
Though sometimes they tell you way more than you actually need to know, like the three minute-long "previously..." for the Veronica Mars episode "The Quick and the Wed," but it's so well edited that I have to find the episode (with "previously") on somewhere like surfthechannel.com before watching the DVD episode.
Invisible Green | May 05, 03:48 CET
cfeuille | May 05, 06:48 CET
... the episodes were 45 minutes long and had fade-to-blacks where the commercial breaks would go.
Aha, don't remember that Gag Halfrunt (i've mercifully blanked most of 'Bugs' from my memory ;) but that's interesting. Also about the placenames/reg numbers etc. Nowadays of course, they seem to have realised that if you want to sell something abroad (especially to the US) you're better going in pretty much the opposite direction (i.e. give it a very distinctly British look and feel) which makes sense - clearly we can't do the stuff US shows do anywhere near as well (for budgetary reasons among others) better, within reason, to stick to what we're good at.
Saje | May 05, 12:21 CET
I like teasers, I'm pretty easy going on opening credits - as long as whatever is used is good quality.
As for 'end tags' I'm not a fan: the only series I can remember seeing them on was Charmed (don't disown me! I liked it but saw it's flaws as well as it's benefits in keeping me entertained) and they did feel like someone coming up and saying: AND HERE IS THE MORAL OF TODAY'S STORY WHICH WE THINK YOU ARE TOO DENSE TO PICK UP UNLESS WE SPELL IT OUT V-E-R-Y CLEARLY
I do however, rather obvious as I'm on here, love Joss' style of delivery - giving you the moral/emotional message throughout the episode and not having the "clunky" delivery of it at the end.
Also, I'm VERY excited for new Joss-ness to be on the TV soon!!!!! :-D
Jaynesgirl | May 05, 15:12 CET
And I love the opening titles and theme tunes.
Gill | May 05, 18:42 CET
I guess this thread started with a discussion of a post on my blog about the Dollhouse pilot script and I am flattered by how many of you dropped by to read it. I'm also grateful to Damon for letting me into the space to join the discussion.
I'm going to read all the comments above before chiming in, but I wanted to say hi, I'm here.
Jill
jill380 | May 05, 19:25 CET
This setting is going to be more accessible to a mass audience than Whedon's previous series. As a rule, sci fi doesn't attract the big numbers of a crime show say, but I think some of Joss's settings have kept him on the fringes (no disrespect, an observation).
Some people may have thought Buffy was only for teens because it was set in a high school. And probably lots of people were afraid to try out a space western.
But Dollhouse is here and now. Present day, could be you or me people. I think that will mean a lot more people will give it a try. And as a result, a lot more people will get hooked.
jill380 | May 05, 21:55 CET
zeitgeist | May 05, 22:14 CET
Hmm. This is a bit troubling. Not that I don't wish everyone involved success, I just am troubled by my imagining of a world where I browse the internet for Dollhouse information similarly to how I browse for Harry Potter information. Which is to say, very warily. Eh, small price to pay for the show's success.
but I think some of Joss's settings have kept him on the fringes (no disrespect, an observation).
I am deeply offended on behalf of the Hellmouth. What is not appealing about a portal to hell hidden underneath a high school? I mean, seriously. There's the attractive locals (eternally young), the interesting local color (various demons), points of cultural interest (the Seal of Danthalzar and that nifty Satanic temple Willow found that one time), and the beautiful scenery (there's uh... the beach). Not to mention famous people who are known to drop by for visits (Dracula; mysterious military types). And... a booming funeral industry.
Yeah ok, I see what you mean. It's just that the tourism brochures are so glossy.
Sunfire | May 06, 01:03 CET
usthem.Yeah i've thought from the start (i.e. since we knew the premise) that it's probably the easiest sell of all of Joss' shows to date. It's got hooks up the wazoo. Which, thinking about it, is only a good thing figuratively ;).
(in a sense it really has every hook, just by the way the show can change from spy thriller to romance to cop show to medical drama to anything else week on week. Or even within the same episode. Then you have the overarching philosophical questions and sort of ground-up character development as well. If that's not made of win then it's at least held together with win cement ;)
Saje | May 06, 01:18 CET
The other thing is the world seems way more receptive to sci fi these days doesn't it? What with Heroes and Lost?
jill380 | May 06, 01:39 CET
I think to some extent it needs to become a TV phenomenon to survive. That's the harsh reality of American network television.
So the more accessible, the better.
gossi | May 06, 01:40 CET
Dollhouse is stealth scifi too and will most likely be Joss' most accessible show and therefore his biggest hit.
TamaraC | May 06, 01:42 CET
hacksaway | May 06, 01:42 CET
I still hope for a House/Dollhouse double bill.
Simon | May 06, 01:45 CET
gossi | May 06, 01:47 CET
Simon | May 06, 01:54 CET
I think that different things turn different people off about the show until someone converts them. I think the movie damned it to a large degree...
For my older bro, who was a vampire snob, all it took was one day when he was too sick to protest. He was hooked.
My sister was turned off because the first episode she saw was Prom, and she was underwhelmed by the hellhounds. She's converted now.
I think that the high school stuff should have appealed to people, as everyone, no matter how Cordelia-esque they were, had some bad, hellish high school moments. Everyone, except for kids who haven't been there yet. (Just you wait, Henry Higgins!)
Talk about universal appeal.
I'm not sure if I agree with Dollhouse as being stealth scifi. I think that it seems more outwardly dystopic than anything else Joss has done, which is a more accepted way to present scifi. After all, most people have read things like 1984, Brave New World, and Fahrenheit-451.
The whole wiping-minds thing and letting people live their fantasies through the dolls seems new, but slightly familiar. I think that one thing this show has going for it is that more and more people have started to watch Joss's other stuff, and will be set to watch this new show.
As for the double bill, isn't the only thing House and Dollhouse have in common is the title? Hmmm. ETA: I think that Bones would be the perfect pairing. Would probably increase viewing for both, for people like me who like DB, but couldn't be arsed to take time out of my life to watch the show.
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BandofBuggered | May 06, 01:55 CET
ETA: Err and my logic flow there was imagining a Doll in one of those twisty-dark House plotlines.
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Sunfire | May 06, 02:04 CET
korkster | May 06, 02:18 CET
Sunfire | May 06, 02:30 CET
jill380 | May 06, 03:11 CET
TamaraC | May 06, 03:40 CET
We can't predict whether Dollhouse will air at 8 or 9 PM (eastern), but we can assume that its time slot won't be constant, this being FOX.
Invisible Green | May 06, 03:52 CET
"We need some sort of bug specialist to determine where and when this body was deposited."
On Dollhouse...
"Echo, you're being programmed with special bug information that makes you a specialist in chronological and geographical information to point time of death."
:)
korkster | May 06, 03:53 CET
And (some?) British editions have them included? Lucky! At least you have the option to watch them. And, Raggedy Edge, you weren't the only one disappointed by the lack of The Gift's one... to the point that they made it an easter egg on the (US) season seven set! (Yeah, a little late; but...) On the set's disc 6: click on Special Features; there's a second, smaller "special features"; highlight it, then click left from there and a Buffy-styled "B" should appear. Click on that, and there should be the super clipfest which opened the 100th episode.
LKW | May 06, 04:04 CET
'Dollhouse' isn't really dystopic because the dollhouse itself is totally illegal so it doesn't present a "society characterised by human suffering" anymore than, for instance, a drama about human trafficking does.
I agree it's not particularly stealth sci-fi though, the concept from the outset is very sci-fi and presumably, since we have tech characters, there'll be machinery to facilitate the imprinting. One of the things that make 'Lost' or 'Heroes' "sneaky sci-fi" is the lack of an overt technological element to what we see ('Heroes' has the handwavy "genetic mutations" but that's effectively magic the way they use it anyway) and rightly or wrongly, most people think sci-fi = futuristic technology.
('Dollhouse' may well be sneaky in the way that BSG is though i.e. a lot of people that don't know much about sci-fi and expect it to be all lasers and spaceships will be surprised at its darkness and complexity - so in the same way that BSG and 'Firefly' attracted a lot of fans that might ordinarily avoid the genre, hopefully 'Dollhouse' will too)
Saje | May 06, 13:41 CET